I have heard so many love stories, but the sad truth is that most of these speak of raging passion and erotica that generally end with stupidly glorified death; the essence of love is lost. I was reading the book of "Tobit", and my first thought was, this is a story which must be told. It was with this intention that I rewrote the entire book as a short poem.
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The Tobit & Sarah Story*
Act I - Introduction
While Israel was in exile,
The fate of two faithful would unite,
Tobit of Nineveh and Sarah of Ectabana[1]’s
misery would end.
Through a common thread of
Tobit’s son “Tobias”
And a tale of;
Son’s love for father,
Spouse’s love for Spouse,
And God’s love for mankind,
Shall forever be told.
Act II - Tobit’s Prayer:
“You brought me out of my father’s land,
I never left your way,
Even on the persecution day,
To every brother I lent my hand,
On that day,
I just buried,
My brethren murdered, whose corpse on street unattended lay,
After my duty, unclean and tired under a tree, I lie,
But the sparrow’s droppings fall in my eye,
Gone is my sight,
No longer the priest, prophet and king am I,
Oh lord, here my body day after day rust,
Oh lord, in your wisdom and justice,
Take me now! Take me now,
And turn me to dust.
Act III - Sarah’s Prayer:
“This life was your gift,
But today I wish it all to end,
I, the apple of my father’s eye,
Oh lord! Call me today and let me die,
Why lord? Why
My seven suitors all found dead?
I can’t bear this shame,
Take me, and take me now,
To the place where all miseries end.
Act IV - The divine intervention:
Before his throne no prayer is unanswered,
Every unsaid word is heard,
But his ways are mysterious,
The thread was about to unwind,
For he can stop every east wind.[2]
A thought he put in Tobit’s mind;
Of an old debt he did remind.
Then to his son “Tobias” he did command:
“Go find a man among our own,
To guide you to the city of Rages[3],
To collect my debt,
Before I lie on my death bed”
Unknown to Tobias, he brought home an angel,
Unknown to father and son,
To Tobit’s only son the guide,
would be Raphael.[4]
With a tear in his eye,
He bid goodbye to the apple of his eye.
Act V - Fishy Tale:
The journey was long,
In the evening by Tigris[5] two weary travellers stopped,
On Raphael’s command,
From Tigris, Tobias pulled out a fish long,
They ate the flesh,
But on Raphael’s command;
Of the fish, he kept the liver, heart and gall.
Act VI - Blind Faith:
As they entered Ectabana,
The angel did instruct:
“Here lives, Sarah a maiden fare,
Marred by fate,
Yet from eternity destined to be your perfect mate.
Her father Raguel belongs to your clan,
And you have every right, to ask for her hand.”
Tobias replied:
“You my companion, you my guide,
You know seven suitors of have died,
It would bring my father’s end,
If I would enter the realm of dead”
The angel replied:
“Those men of flesh,
Those men of lust,
By their intention they were turned to dust.
And dragged to hell,
By Sarah’s pursuer Asmodeus devil.
But with you, all shall be well,
Coz amidst you shall the holy one dwell,
Burn the fish’s heart, burn the liver,
And from its smell,
The devil shall flee.”
He had blind faith,
And obeyed his guide’s command.
Raguel pitied the young lad’s fate,
But to Tobias he gave Sarah in marriage,
That night, Tobias burned on incense the (fish’s) heart and liver,
And for God’s mercy, they did pray,
Before their marriage they consummate.
Raguel lacked faith,
He had asked a grave for the young man be dug,
But when he came to know,
The couple were sleeping in each other’s hug.
The grave was quickly covered,
And a feast was arranged.
Indeed, Raguel realized his daughter was indeed blessed,
And he praised, he praised God like never before.
While Tobias was at the feast,
The guide collected the debt.
Act VII - Held by the thread:
As Tobias, his spouse, and his guide,
Neared his father’s home,
His guide and he rushed ahead,
To prepare his house,
For his spouse.
He applied the (fish) gall on his father’s eye,
And peeled off the layer,
Restored was Tobit’s sight.
Tobit’s joy knew no bound,
His misery no longer did him hound.
So he declared;
“Whatever from Ectabana and Rages,
You have got,
Half of it from you must part,
Give it to your guide,
For without him you would not have been equally yoked,
And in my misery, I would have died.”
It was then that the angel Raphael revealed his true form,
And as the household praised God,
The angel left for his heavenly abode.
Tobias was the thread,
Angel Raphael was the medium,
Through these God had worked two miracles,
And united two lives.
Act VIII - Coz his love never ends
I don’t know what would be my fate,
I don’t whether there is love at first sight,
I don’t know whether the marriage,
would be of love or arranged,
But I am blessed with faith,
And my father knows what is right.
Our mutual love might end,
But my father’s love will never end.
- Prajval Albuquerque
* The poem is a work inspired by the book of Tobit; the poet does not claim that the poem is historically or biblically accurate. The poet while exercising creative liberty, has made a sincere effort to protect the intent and content of the book any inconsistency or inaccuracy is highly regretted. The readers are encouraged to read the book of Tobit for a better understanding of the scripture.
[1] Nineveh and Ectabana: Ancient Assyrian cities.
[2] East wind: The east wind of the Bible is a fierce wind (Isaiah 27:8, Job 38:24), it can destroy ships on the high seas (Psalm 48:7, Ezekiel 27:26), it can scatter and sweep out people (Job 15:2, 27:21, Jonah 4:8, Jeremiah 18:17).
[3] Rages: Ancient Assyrian City.
[4] Raphael: Raphael is an archangel responsible for healing.
[5] Tigris: River Tigris.



